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Determine my mind type
As you would my blood
It flows through every ounce
Just as my life would
Wish it stayed, more than a second or two
A loss of life, and draining me too

Systematic failure, attack
The little things I lack
Reside in what I have,
Those last little bits
Raged attititude --

Trust, trust, ye need only such
Writing...writing, what else is exists?

So many lives, touched in one way or more
Torn to shreds, left so bare

Bleeding as a tortured soul,
Yet reminiscent of what remains my whole.
Signify my trials through my deeds done
Forget not the respect you've won.

Trial, trial, many nights alone
Tears calmly, calling my soul home

Watch the light wisp away too soon
A life indeed, stripped to the bone

Left for dead, I seek recompense
Solution is what I need
Not a barber who'll make me bleed
But a life where I can write down my two cents

I'll sit and wait, I'll sit and tell
Shit, I might even yell
But what happens, when no voice shall come
And its not just some...

Joke, its not funny.
I looked into your eyes, and told you so
You even told me I was a special Joe
But I lack the means by which to say
That somehow I've solved these issues here

Many though, have I rid myself truthfully of
Life suspicion, nothingness asured.

I try to write, and I write some more
But I lack salvation, a path ahead.

Some will read, and will never know

Who the hell, really is this Joe?
©2005-2010 ~artofpoetry
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Author's Comments

I wrote this, persay, on a whim of a note while in a certain amount of duress/distress, sitting next to someone who I care about, but am so incredibly confused of with whats going on.

Its like...uber confusion. Of Doom. No really. Listen to me with a tune of social injustice. It lightens the mood.

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:clap: a :+favlove: for this one...

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Go to [link] why? WHY? Find out for urself.
:iconfiresign16:
awesome! :) Merry Christmas!

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:blackrose: Life is tough, but I am tougher :blackrose:
:iconnjkay:
Wow. That was so powerful. I really liked that. It's a total fav.

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Sarcasm? I try to avoid her company.
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:iconartofpoetry:
Thank you. I think I was waiting for the 'more powerfuls' to comment on this one, but I liked your comment better than what else I could have gotten out of it. Merry Christmas to everyone.

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Joe was here =]
:iconnjkay:
Haha. Thanks and you're welcome, I think? Merry Christmas to you too!

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Sarcasm? I try to avoid her company.
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:iconablativelove:
that is excellent. the structure reminds me of how thoughts go around my head: continuous, related, but always disjointed.
you know what, I'll give you a typing ovation too. :+fav:

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-You have cancer.
-That's not very funny Doctor House.
-It's growing on your humerus - I'd say that makes it down-right hilarious.
92% of the teenage population are in a group that doesn't include the other 8%. If you aren't, good for you.
:iconallabelle:
absoloutely brilliant, the structure is perfect, definite favorite

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...mirrors are objects that should think for longer before they reflect...
:iconartofpoetry:
You have to actually click the add to favorites button in order to make it a favorite :P

haha. You've convinced me to read on to more of your things-a-ma-dobbers

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Joe was here =]
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crap...I forgot to do that...:p

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-You have cancer.
-That's not very funny Doctor House.
-It's growing on your humerus - I'd say that makes it down-right hilarious.
92% of the teenage population are in a group that doesn't include the other 8%. If you aren't, good for you.

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